Slowly trudging down the beat up back road, I feel the spine tingling bitter rain rolling off my bare skin. No jacket, no place to go, and all alone. What should I do? Where should I go? I just keep walking ahead until a stranger pulls up in a car and my life is forever changed. In the film "The Blind Side" written and directed by John Lee Hancock, Leigh, the main character, takes it upon herself to make a decision that will impact the entire family. Leigh's caring and helpful personality requires her to help Michael, the stranger she finds walking the street, and take him into her home. Her actions have wonderful results for both Michael and the family. The consequences that came with Leigh's decision led to The family being more open, inspiring others that through work comes success, and that giving improves others lives tremendously.
Good start, Sophia.
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I just revised it, thank you for the advice!
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