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M: The consequences that came with Leigh's decision led to the family being more open.

E: It made them all happier

A: They became interested in Michael and wanted to know more

A: He had a happy outlook on everything that made them more full of joy.

E: They became more talkative

A: The Family was off their phones more

A: They had more family dinners and talked about their day

T: After Leigh invited mike in the house, the home felt more like a home and was more open.

M:  The consequences that came with Leigh's decision led to, inspiring others that through work comes success.

E: His determination in Football

A: His little brother would train him to get into shape

A: He did whatever he was told the first time and listened to the coach

E: Did whatever he could to protect his family

A: Saved his little brother life in the car accident

A: Protected his older sister when boys were ganging up on her

T: Michael’s determinate personality inspires others.

M: The consequences that came with Leigh's decision led to that giving improves others lives tremendously.

E: Gave him happiness

A:  Gave him love from the family

A: Gave him a home, and food to eat

E: Leigh gave him a chance at anything he wanted to peruse

A: Agreed with football for mike which he loved

A:  Got him a tutor so he could graduate, and peruse the one thing he truly loved, football.

T: Leigh gave Mike love that improved his own and also others who witnessed it.

Having mike being invited into Leigh’s house led to the family being more open, the inspiration of others that through work comes success, and that giving improves others lives tremendously. With the help of Leigh, Mikes life will be changed forever, she has shown him what love is, and how to give. Not only has Leigh taught mike lessons. Mike has taught the family lessons as well, he has taught them how to be compassionate, and to never give up, and to protect the ones you love. Strutting up to the podium, I feel a sensation of accomplishment. As I look out to the ones who gave me support and love through tough times, and think about how much my life would be different without them. That’s when I realize I have a real family, which for me is all that matters in life.